This week we have a piece of flash fiction inspired by Gemini, written by Dan Purdue.
Dan lives and
writes in Leamington Spa. His short fiction has been published in many
places online and in print, including Writers’
Forum , MicroHorror.com, Defenestration, Every Day Fiction, The View From Here, and The Waterhouse Review. His stories have won prizes in the HE Bates Short Story Competition, the
Chapter One International Short Story Competition, Flash500.com, and the Seán Ó
Faoláin Prize. “Somewhere to Start From”, a collection featuring many of his
published and prizewinning stories, is available in print and as an ebook from Amazon and Smashwords.
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Project Gemini
It had been
an unremarkable day, right up to the point when Katja opened the front door to
find her own face staring back at her from over her husband’s shoulder.
Later, while
the woman unpacked her small wheeled suitcase, Robert and Katja sat at the
kitchen table. ‘Our funding was cut,’ he explained. ‘The lab, the research, everything.’
His face flushed. ‘We were told to destroy
her.’
Katja
frowned. Robert had never fully explained what he did for a living. Something
for the government, he’d said. Important work. When she pressed him for details
he’d tell her she wouldn’t understand. But, stuck in the house all day, she’d quickly
tired of British quiz shows and soap operas. It was amazing what you could
discover on the internet. She’d read about genetics; she knew what was
considered possible. What was legal and what wasn’t. ‘This woman,’ Katja said.
‘She’s me, yes?’
‘We called
her Eve,’ Robert said. He evaded her questions about when and how the copy had
been made, or how long she would stay. He said DNA could be found in anything,
a few skin cells, a strand or two of hair. He told her she was being
unreasonable. He promised it was only temporary; he’d find somewhere for her to
go.
Katja glared
at him. ‘This is why,’ she said. ‘For this… experiment. This is why you marry
me.’
The look
that flashed in Robert’s eyes confirmed everything. ‘Don’t be ridiculous,’ he
snapped.
As the weeks
passed, Katja realised Robert had no plans to find Eve a new home. She saw a
tenderness she’d never experienced in the way he spoke and acted towards her.
He clearly considered Eve superior to Katja, and made little if any attempt to
disguise it. Their conversations ended abruptly when Katja entered the room,
and their little glances and smiles soured every meal time.
It was hard
not to be jealous. Eve had never known hunger or desperation. She’d always have
the straighter teeth, the better skin, a posture that had never hunched against
the biting cold of a Moscow winter. Flawless English flowed from her lips; she
made no secret of how amusing she found Katja’s grammatical stumbles.
Everything
changed the night Katja, lying awake, heard footsteps along the corridor, from
the spare room to Robert’s bedroom.
The next
night, she put an end to it. It was easier than she expected. The knife slipped
in between two of his ribs. The shock kept him from crying out. He clutched at
her, mouthing, ‘Why?’, but he already knew the answer.
The beauty
of it was that Eve couldn’t admit who she really was. The same things that
brought her into existence would determine her fate: a few skin cells, a couple
of strands of hair. Katja thought there was a nice symmetry to that. She smiled
as she headed towards Heathrow, wondering whether, with such a straightforward
crime laid out in front of them, the police would ever notice the empty safe,
or her missing passport.
Oh, wonderful! Lovely unexpected ending; a great twins story. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, a lovely twist on classic twins tales :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteGreat take on the prompt - and a nice ending. Particularly like the detail with the English grammar.
ReplyDeleteThere speaks a writer who is a)doing a lot of editing and b)living in the USA!
DeleteYup... !
DeleteReally enjoyed this, Dan, especially on the second read. Feels very filmic.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks to everybody who's commented - I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story. Thanks also to Chloe for running this project. I'm looking forward to seeing what the other ten tales are like!
ReplyDeleteA sharp story. I particularly liked the line: Katja thought there was a nice symmetry to that.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Derek.
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